SERPENTINA Chapter 1

SERPENTINA Chapter 1

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Dark leaves rustled in the forest, their dried tips rubbing against each other like the slow rattle of a snake. Emma paused, a warning echoing in her mind. Since her arrival to the reptile research base on Crete, she had ventured into the palm forest alone each afternoon, wandering deeper each time.

Never enter the forest alone. It was the rule her research mentor emphasized most during orientation. But there was nothing truly dangerous on the island. Hercules had cleared away all the deadly creatures to honor Zeus’s birthplace. She smiled, recounting the myth the airport taxi driver had told them. Emma knew, out of all the snakes there, only the cat snake had venom, and it was too mild to hurt a human.

Still, if Dr. Belken discovered her sneaking out at dusk, she might as well kiss a Columbia University recommendation letter goodbye. Yet the forest called her in, beckoning her to explore its ancient grounds.

She stepped over sandy soil, glancing over her shoulder at the wooden stairs and scanning to see if anyone was watching before turning into the trees. She savored a breath. The air was dry and the heat tame, with an endless breeze carrying wisps of sea salt and the spice of wild herbs through the dancing shadows of leaves.

A rustling halted her steps.

Her eyes darted to catch a beige, reptilian tail slipping into the nearby shrubs.

She held her breath and crept toward it, afraid to scare it off. It would sense the vibration of even her lightest step.

She peered through a thicket of narrow, glossy leaves and clustered pink flowers. Her heart pounded, instincts heightened, but she reminded herself that even a bite couldn’t kill her.

At first, she didn’t see anything. Then scales materialized among the leaves on a thick, coiled body. Only now they were green and pink. She squinted. Was it a different snake, or had it changed?

Its serpentine head emerged through the leaves, forked tongue flickering. She froze.

This was not a cat snake.

Images of the other native snakes raced through her mind. She was good at identifying them. This didn’t match any. With all the travel to and from the island, she supposed it could be an invasive species. Her heart pounded faster and sweat broke on her brow. It could be venomous. And she was alone.

To her relief, the snake slid through a patch of tall grasses and emerged on the far side. Her eyes widened in disbelief as the scales changed back to beige as it slithered over dried leaves.

She slid a trembling hand into the pocket of her capris, then took a picture with her phone. A closer one would be better. She held her breath and stepped again. A dry leaf crinkled underfoot, and the snake’s head snapped in her direction. Its eyes flared as they set on her, hungry with anger.

Predator’s eyes.

Heart drumming, Emma turned and sprinted back to the base. She burst into the atrium, bending over to catch her breath.

“It appears I have to go over the rules with someone.” A voice from the side doorway made her jump.

“Dr. Belken!” She faced her research mentor, chest heaving.

“Do you realize what trouble your wanderings could get me in?”

She nodded, grasping for words to explain herself. When he had warned of dangers, he meant strangers who might prey on a young foreign girl wandering alone. But the forest was gated off for research and far away from the crowded city center, where an occasional pickpocket might lurk among the seaside cafes and street vendors selling figurines of the Minotaur. Emma was annoyed by the warning that a boy her age could go pretty much anywhere without.

“So,” he said, his eyes glistening. They reminded her of an owl’s, both wise and threatening. “Did you find anything?”

Relief flooded her that she might actually escape this without any repercussions. She nodded, her mouth dry. “A snake,” she said. “But I couldn’t identify it.”

He placed his glasses on. “Where?” he asked. She pointed. “Let’s go,” he said without hesitation. She lingered, the final traces of daylight now slipping from the sky, and wondered if he’d be insulted if she warned him.

She described the snake’s changing patterns as they paced toward the ferns, and she felt a slight relief having him there. His tall, lanky frame didn’t offer much security, but surely he could identify the snake. He wouldn’t put her in danger, would he?

But when they reached the ferns and searched the underbrush and surrounding trees, the snake was gone.

Or at least they didn’t see it.

She quickened her pace as they headed back, recalling how seamlessly it could conceal itself even in daylight, and tensed with each step, poised for it to strike from the earthy shadows.

*

Emma locked her legs around her friend’s shoulder in a jiu jitsu hold as they rolled over their cabin floor the following morning.

“Okay, okay,” Pria said, tapping Emma’s hip. She released her, and Pria wiped long, silken waves from her sticky face. “Can we be done?” she asked. “We have lab samples to go through.”

Emma nodded. “Thanks.”

Her friend promised she could practice jiu jitsu on her during the two weeks of their trip. Emma never missed a class, and she was so close to getting her black belt she didn’t want to fall behind.

“You’re welcome,” Pria said, as she rested back on her elbow. Emma loved her friend’s voice, melodic with a hint of raspiness that gave it texture. “I’m sure it’ll pay off to have a friend like you if I’m ever in trouble,” Pria added.

Emma smiled, offering a hand to help her friend from the floor. Pria was the only one outside the martial arts gym that Emma felt comfortable practicing with. She was reluctant to try it on her boyfriend, especially after her parents called her sport of choice aggressive and suggested barre or Pilates instead.

“So, what did the snake look like?” Pria asked as they walked down the hall.

The mysterious scales flashed in Emma’s mind, scales she had stayed up late into the night thinking about, searching the internet for photos to match them. “The back had a diamond pattern,” she said, “but its color changed with its surroundings, like a chameleon.”

“Are you sure it wasn’t just shadows or the sunlight hitting different angles?” Pria asked.

Emma shook her head. “No, the color totally transformed. I’ve never seen a snake like that.” Emma took her phone out and scrolled. “Here, I got a picture.” She squinted, then zoomed in. It was the picture of the ferns, the exact spot the snake had been coiled. Only the snake wasn’t there. She zoomed in farther, unnerved. “That’s weird.”

“What?”

“I swore I got it…”

Pria studied Emma’s screen, leaning in until her eyes were just inches from it. “I don’t see a snake,” she said. “Maybe you were shaking so much you didn’t aim.”

“Maybe,” Emma murmured, unconvinced.

Pria shook her head. “I would’ve fainted. Thank god it didn’t bite you.”

Emma nodded, shuddering at the thought. It would’ve been so easy. She thought about messaging Jason to tell him, but her boyfriend was probably asleep—it was five in the morning in Chile, where he was visiting family. With the time difference, and his spotty service in his mom’s hometown near the mountains, they kept missing each other. She had almost gotten used to not talking every day like they had in New York. He hadn’t been thrilled with her choice to spend their final summer of high school doing a research project abroad. Waking him up with a text about her discovery didn’t seem like a good idea. Maybe a picture would help ease the distance, but one look at herself in her phone’s camera, with her hair frizzy and green eyes bloodshot, made her put the phone away.

Pria unlocked the door to the venomics lab down the hall. Cages lined the walls holding cat snakes, with their striped gray bodies coiled languidly and pale-yellow eyes that followed the girls as they passed.

Emma began preparing the solvents for the procedure. Today they aimed to isolate the toxin from the cat snakes’ mild venom and prepare to purify its various contents. Emma’s specific project focused on using the isolated molecules to fight tumor cells. The process was tedious, but she often reminded herself the goal was exciting. They might find a cancer treatment. The venom’s disintegrin enzyme had already shown cytotoxic effects on tumor cells in petri dishes.

Dr. Belken was noticeably absent as the girls labored until afternoon. When he didn’t make his usual two o’clock check, they set a timer and left for lunch. Outside, the woman who served both as their chaperone and Dr. Belken’s secretary was sitting behind a bulky computer monitor.

“Have you seen Dr. Belken?” Emma asked.

She shook her head, her short blond hair immobilized by gel. “He’s been gone all day.” She leaned in and lowered her voice. “I think he’s obsessed with finding that snake you saw yesterday.” Then she smiled like it wasn’t too serious.

“Really?” Emma asked, her heart fluttering at the thought of seeing it again. Just the idea of the snake allured her.

“Does that surprise you?” Pria asked. It did, at least a little. As a high school student, Emma half expected this Ivy League professor to trivialize her claim of finding an unidentified snake. “He’s dying to find new compounds to isolate,” Pria added. “Just the thought of a new or even out of place species is probably driving him crazy.”

He was rather over the top. In interviews he’d admitted to injecting small amounts of snake venom into his blood for years, turning himself into a human source of antivenoms. He’d lost funding several times for his questionable methods, but Emma’s dream school, Columbia University, still praised his genius. Emma’s parents, on the other hand, had scrutinized Dr. Belken for days when she expressed interest in working with him. But they couldn’t stop her drive to work on a potential cancer treatment, not after her little brother’s diagnosis.

That reminded her. She took out her phone and rang her mom’s number.

“Hi, Emma,” her mom answered. “Listen, I only have a quick second to talk, but how’s it going there?”

“Fine,” Emma said. “How’s he doing today?”

Her mom’s sigh rattled the phone speaker. Danny wasn’t getting better. Thousands of miles away, his tiny body was held captive to a ruthless disease, while she, in her parents’ minds, was wasting time basking in the Greek sun. Did she really need to go on this trip?

  She beat out hundreds of applicants in the essay contest to secure research funds from the school district, then read all of Dr. Belken’s papers and successfully emailed him to volunteer for his research team. This trip was only a few weeks, but they would’ve brought the venom samples back whether she went or not. Was she selfish? She tried not to let the guilt overtake her and, instead, felt resolved to make this project worthwhile. She held onto the hope, however wavering, that she could find something. After all, her grandfather had been born in Greece. Although he had died before she was born, she hoped his homeland might somehow speak to her. 

“We’re with him now. He’s the same,” her mom said.

She imagined her parents in their white lab coats, her mom seeing patients and her dad doing lab research, in the same hospital where their son lay fighting the cancer in his blood. He had gone through chemo several times, but this last treatment had been the hardest on him. His doctors were still unsure if it had worked, and it left him more drained, a shadow of the energetic child he once was.

“I’ll be back to see him soon,” she said, her throat tightening over her words.

“Honey,” her mother said. “You should really consider working in Dad’s lab. It’s very credible, and a lot shorter of a commute.”

The guilt deepened.

“His lab’s great, but I’m not interested in rheumatology,” she said. “And working with Dr. Belken could really help me get into Columbia.” She didn’t say the obvious, that she wanted to work on a promising cancer cure. Her parents never expected her to actually discover something.

“Yeah … well, we’ll talk about it when you get back.” Her mom’s voice sounded tired.

Emma’s stomach clenched as she ended the call. She rarely saw her busy parents, but when she did, the same topics surfaced. She now imagined their disapproval morphing into outrage if they knew an unidentified snake was lurking in the forest.

“Ladies.” Dr. Belken’s voice jolted Emma from her thoughts. He stood in the doorway, his disheveled hair and undereye circles hinting exhaustion. “There’s something I need to discuss with you.”

He paced into his office, and Emma tried not to grimace at the stench of sour sweat. She glanced at Pria who pursed her lips in exaggerated interest, always amused by their mentor’s eccentricity.

Dr. Belken rubbed his glasses with a cloth. His brow was deeply furrowed, and he avoided eye contact as they sat across from him. “With this snake out there, unidentified,” he said, “I’ve decided it’s safest if we treat ourselves with a general antivenom, prophylactically.”

Emma tensed and glanced at Pria, whose face was serious now.

“No thanks,” Pria said. “I mean, there’s not much of a chance it’ll come bite me. I’m not wandering into the woods. And I thought there were no venomous snakes here anyway.”

“There shouldn’t be,” he said. “But a species could’ve been transported or escaped from somewhere else. And the nearest hospital is several hours away.” His voice turned authoritative. “I’m in charge of keeping you safe. I don’t know how many of those snakes are out there, and if either of you gets bitten, this would protect you. It’s the safest option. I’ve already injected myself.”

Emma spotted the bandage on his gangly arm and relaxed a little.

“But you’ve already done that to yourself a bunch of times,” Pria said, always the more vocal of the two of them. “You probably have some immunity anyway. Who knows what that would do to us.” Emma was secretly relieved her friend was standing up for them. She wouldn’t even consider questioning him, not a research professor from Columbia. She might have a near-perfect GPA, but a letter of recommendation from him could be her ticket to acceptance there. Maybe Pria had less to lose—she was interested in science, but not Columbia, and had admitted a motivation for the trip was ‘to check out the cute guys,’ a goal which had gone mostly unfulfilled. But Emma was more concerned with making a good impression, and showing distrust of Dr. Belken’s judgment didn’t seem like a good idea, even if the injection made her uneasy.

“This is an antivenom, not the venom itself. It isn’t dangerous,” he said simply. “It’s really routine.”

Emma considered. He had worked with snakes for years and likely done this many times, and she had been unsettled since she’d found the snake, watching her step even indoors. A general antivenom would likely cover whatever venom that snake might carry.

“I already got my shot,” their chaperone called from the doorway.

“Yes,” Dr. Belken said. “She did fine, no reaction. I just suggest you sit for a few minutes afterward to make sure there’s no allergy.”

“Wow, wait,” Pria said. “You didn’t say anything about that before.”

Dr. Belken smiled a little. “Of course, any substance has a slight chance of causing allergy, and this is no exception. But I have antihistamine here in case that happens, not to worry.”

“I’ll do it,” Emma said quietly. Pria looked at her wide-eyed, and Emma was reluctant to meet her gaze. “I think it’s the safest,” Emma whispered. “That snake looked like it wanted to strike.” She heard Pria sigh.

“Fine, but I’m passing on this one,” Pria said.

“Okay,” Dr. Belken said. “I’m only trying to offer protection, so if you change your mind, I have more.”

He gestured Emma forward and opened a box of syringes. He attached one to a vial of fluid and tapped the air to the top, pushing until a clear droplet gathered at the needle’s tip.

Emma didn’t flinch as he prepared to inject. She was thinking about her brother, all he’d endured in that hospital. He’d had more injections in his eight years of life than she’d had in eighteen. She watched a cat snake in its tank at the far corner of the room. He was basking on a rock in the sunlight near the window, his glossy eyes like citrine gems.

The needle pricked her arm, and she grimaced. It seemed to hurt more than shots she’d had in the past, but maybe she had just forgotten their pain. She held her breath as the fluid seeped into her muscle with a slow sting.

It was done. Dr. Belken stared at her arm a second longer than she thought he should have.

“I’m fine,” she said, thinking he was waiting for reassurance.

Only when she stood, she wasn’t fine. All at once, a sharp, hot pain seared through her arm, and she yelped, clutching the spot. The pain sunk its claws deeper, piercing her bone. She crouched, gasping as it spread to her chest. Her heart began to race.

“Oh my god! What’s wrong!?” Pria said, kneeling beside her.

Emma couldn’t speak. Scalding heat encased her body, and her hands began to shake.

“She must be having a reaction,” Dr. Belken said urgently from somewhere behind her.

“Yeah, no shit,” Pria cried.

“Stay calm, it’ll be okay,” he said.“What the hell did you do?” Pria screamed, but the sound faded by the time it reached Emma’s ears. She shook her head to clear it, but that only made the world spin. The scene before her blurred, distorted as she lost vision. Then everything went black.

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The Trope Dilemma

There’s a conflict I often feel between writing something new and staying loyal to the tropes of a genre. There are readers who will roll their eyes at tropes, while others eagerly await them.

If the characters are well developed and relatable, a story can transcend genre. I feel a special kind of satisfaction when someone is not a huge fantasy reader, but appreciates a fantasy piece I’ve written. I like the idea of making a fantasy novel accessible to those who are not hardcore fans. But there’s a balance I want to strike. There are readers who love fantasy for the quintessentially fantasy elements– the evil force waiting for vengeance, the powerful magic relic, the medieval setting, the secret heir, the chosen one, a friend showing up just in time to save the hero.  Nevertheless, it’s important to make these things feel new, or else readers who enjoy these elements may also tire of them. 

Sometimes this means including a trope by allowing it to unfold, but then changing the outcome. The trope will trigger an expectation from the reader, which means, as the writer, you can surprise them. 

Another option is acknowledging that an element in the story is a trope. Something might be so cliché it can break the reader’s suspension of disbelief, so you have to acknowledge it in some way. 

And finally, a trope can’t be included for trope’s sake. It can’t stand alone as a plot point. It has to serve the story. A dragon shouldn’t be there just because it’s fantasy. If any given trope is well incorporated into your specific story, it should have a unique and new element to it.

This is what I’ve aimed to accomplish. I want to write the best story possible, to entertain and also spark reflection. But ultimately I know I can’t please everyone. If I write a story that speaks to just one person, that warms my soul. 

For those of you who read fantasy, what are you looking to read next? Is there anything you’re tired of reading? 

Short Story Publication

I’m excited to announce that my short story, Pygmalion, is now published as an ebook to kindle direct publishing and is available on Amazon!

If anyone wants to buy it I would appreciate the support. If you have already read it I would also love if you left a review.

Pygmalion was first published in the 2019 summer edition of Mad Scientist Journal, but after one year the rights returned to me, and I decided to make it more accessible and self publish it with kindle direct. It was my first time self publishing and the process was irritating at times but overall very manageable! I found the cover art for free on Pexels, and edited the title into it with Snapseed.

Description: Jon, an enamored medicine resident, thinks he found the one, an exemplary internist named Sara. But when she mysteriously disappears following the death of a high ranking official at their hospital, it calls everything into question. As the death is ruled a homicide, Jon finds himself searching not only for his lost love, but for answers. He soon uncovers a chilling truth about an experimental technology system at their hospital, one he believes is to blame for the patient’s murder. Desperate to absolve Sara, he searches for proof to convince others, but ends up uncovering his own startling role in the experiment.

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Writing this short story taught me to push myself outside of my comfort zone. I had been reluctant to write a short story for years because I felt they were too hard to write, and that I didn’t know how. But I kept hearing that I should try it, that it was a good step to take before writing a novel. I had jumped right into novel writing but now realize that working on a short story helped develop skills in plotting, precision, and efficiency with scene creation. When I came up with the idea for this story I wasn’t sure I could pull off the story’s premise. It was something I had never written about before. And I originally wanted it to be a novel. After sitting on it for over a year, I decided to try it as a short story. I did my research and read other short stories. I still didn’t feel comfortable or like I possessed the right skills, but I started writing, then rewriting, and pushed myself to explore something I wasn’t totally comfortable with. And it worked. I wanted to share this lesson and encourage others to try something new, because being uncomfortable with a new subject or type of writing could ultimately be beneficial!

Where Ashes Reign

Where Ashes Reign

Published by Authors 4 Authors Publishing in December of 2021.

The three kingdoms in the river valley, a fantastical realm inspired by ancient Mesopotamia, are on the verge of collapse with unending drought and rising violence. Emory, the princess of the most powerful kingdom, receives an unexpected guest who claims a curse has gripped the land, causing dark spirits to rise. Feeding off hate, they possess the minds of men, causing senseless murders, and of beasts, causing them to emerge from seclusion and feed on human flesh at the outskirts of the cities.

Emory travels with her new acquaintance, who claims to be from the immortal realm, to an enemy kingdom, where the one who cast the curse was last seen. But before they can defeat him, her friend is killed.

Abandoned in enemy lands, where her mere identity imperils her and one misstep would mean death, Emory is captured by the enemy king and enslaved, beaten and starved to the brink of death. Then, the one who cast the curse appears before her, offering his aid in exchange for a favor. She agrees, but he then possesses her. Emory must rely on her knowledge of the curse, and newfound strength, to free herself of possession, and save the place she has always called home.

*Earlier versions of this, prior to feedback from NYC Pitch Conference:

In a time of drought and bloodshed, a diver returns from sea with a tale of dark shapes lurking in its depths. His claims are mocked by all except Emory, the princess of Tryn, who is driven to find an explanation. When an unexpected guest arrives in Tryn claiming a curse has gripped the land, only Emory believes him, and joins him on a mission to enemy lands. But when he is mysteriously killed, she alone must face the curse and stop impending war. Abandoned in desperate lands, where her mere identity imperils her and one misstep would mean death, she concocts a drastic plan for peace. But before she can complete it, she is ensnared by a darkness greater than she ever imagined, and is forced to partake in a menacing plot to destroy her world. Her knowledge of the curse, and bonds with new friends, may be the only thing to save her, and the place she has always called home.

**I included another earlier version below. I wanted the query to sound more urgent, with heightened stakes, and I changed the language to be more active than passive. 

Emory, a princess living in the lavish palace of Tryn, yearns to see the world beyond her home. Her father warns her of growing tensions between neighboring kingdoms, so she resorts to old books to quench her curiosity. There, she reads of an ancient mystery about her kingdom. She worries she may never find answers to the questions it presents, until an unexpected guest arrives in Tryn. He offers her the explanations she seeks, and claims a curse is to blame for impending wars between kingdoms. His claims are widely dismissed, but Emory believes him; in hopes of ending the curse, she runs away from her home to follow him. But when he is mysteriously killed, Emory finds herself alone in desperate lands, more dangerous than she ever imagined. Before she can decide her next step, she encounters a sinister power and is ensnared in a menacing plot to destroy her world. She must rely on her faith in new-found friends and her knowledge of the ancient mystery to prevent war and make it home alive.

Resources for Writers

Here’s a list of resources I’ve used and found helpful.

Websites:

queryshark.blogspot.com  MUST read before you query!!

http://www.superheronation.com Take the quiz! This is useful for not only superhero novels.

http://www.helpingwritersbecomeauthors.com

http://ellenbrockediting.com/the-help-desk/

https://janefriedman.com/resources/

http://www.agentquery.com/

http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/quizzes/wordy_quiz.htm

Videos:

https://www.youtube.com/user/WriteAboutDragons  Video footage of the writing class instructed by author Brandon Sanderson

https://www.youtube.com/user/KeytopServices

Books:

The Elements of Style, by E. B. White and William Strunk, Jr. (A must read!)

On Writing, by Stephen King

Plot and Structure, by James Scott Bell

My Video Blog:

https://www.youtube.com/user/gottahavfaith21

Moth & Rust

Moth & Rust

 

         Moth and Rust begins within the confines of a gated city, where Eve fights for a future as a physician in one of America’s last universities. Beyond the gates an unsafe country wanes with poverty and desperation. Abroad, an incessant war over scarce resources has begun, threatening to reach American soil. Amidst the turmoil, weakened nations fall victim to a clandestine organization whose leader intends to eliminate the excess population and select those fit to carry humankind into the future. When the organization takes hold of Eve’s city, guards collect its inhabitants. Eve is thrown into a vicious competition for survival in which her compassion has no place, and she is forced to re-examine the distinction between good and evil, human and animal, until an unexpected encounter with one of the guards changes the prospect of her future. Faced with the choice to escape, she embarks on a dangerous journey to reclaim freedom, finding love in the face of loss, and hope in the face of despair.